Buranko

Thanks, great reply, love the color coding!

suffering from success

Thanks for the review Lim ^^. I'm glad to see you enjoyed the structure (i worked really hard to make it barely resemble a poem, not prose). I agree with ...

poetic*

I was actually going for the slice of life (warm, fuzzy poeric aftertaste) but I guess it doesn't get that feeling across. Thank you for pointing that out!

Inspired by Kafka's Letters to Felice

P.S. Your profile picture is so cool!

This poem is based on me not trusting that the color red is actually named red. Maybe everyone sees a totally different color but they are taught to call it ...

yup, something cold, like a metallic mask

yea, the inspiration behind it was what if we don't define the same color in the same way. Maybe you see blue ish yellow but if your parents tell you ...

It is inspired by kafka but not just metamorphosis, some other quotes i found in his works as well

Thanks for reviewing :3

So are you saying that the poem needs to be longer ? I have no clue what you just said

Why did you copy forever's review

I wanted to make the poem feel as detached as possible that is why you might spot the fact that I never use names or proper numbers. The term "certain" ...