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Re: When we were young...
Wow. Wouldn't change a thing; this is so heartfelt and sweet, and gah I just love it. Keep it up!
Mar 8, 2012 -
Re: Candy Lies
This is awesome, your title caught me and then your poem got me! Anywho this is really good I'd love to hear some more from you! Keep it up.-Bryn
Mar 8, 2012 -
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Post more please haha I'd hate to be left hanging! I'm really liking the story!
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Enigma
Hey Hey..You HAD me at the first stanza, the use of that simile as all I needed! I agree with rain. Very good imagery and you flow is nice too. ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Die by the Gun
Yeah I'm going to work on it.. I think it can be something cool.. haha It was pretty late when I wrote it :) thanks everyone
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Shall We Play a Game?
Thanks so much for the likes :) ya as far as puncuation I purposely made it that way. But I think I forgot to continue it all the way through. ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: My Words are Silent
Very touching, very relatable. I sensed the innocence from the very beginning. Pretty much everything everyone else said. Brilliant brilliant poem.
Sep 30, 2011