BrumalHunter

Part II will be published on June 28, and perhaps part III as well.

I have a specific folder on my PC for dismissed ideas, so I know the feeling. Don't give up though; your story has much potential!

Thank you for your review, my kind friend. I see you find our spelling of "storey" strange, but you'll see that American English differs from British English in many ways; ...

No worries, lass. ;)

Thank you for the review, JC. (I see you signed your review that way, so I hope you don't mind if I call you by that name.) Excuse the pun, ...

Hey, you aren't supposed to be saying this now! We, the readers, should realise this ourselves when it appears in the novel. Spoiler alert! As for the explanation of who ...

Yes, I see now that my review is longer than the actual chapter! I must also thank you for taking the time to leave me a message. And with the ...

You flatter me; the story is yours and your time and effort has gone into it, therefore any praise it is to receive, goes to you. I merely write what ...

I only drop novels if they're really bad. Yours, on the other hand, is quite good, so I shall continue to review your novel up to its very completion (and ...

Mercia is a continent on the planet Lauracia. It resembles Medieval Europe and the setting of this novel, An Arrow's Flight , is its eastern side, known as Aeste Mercia. ...

You're welcome!

Do not worry, avoiding end-of-sentence prepositions is the aspect of English with which I struggle the most. Half of the times, I notice one has slipped into my writing and ...

I am pleased that my reviews are of use to you, my friend. As for Daniel's reason for staying with his parents, I think your suggestion works perfectly. People often ...

My vocabulary is adequate, actually, but thank you anyway - I mostly rely on a my thesaurus for synonyms. ;)

You are very welcome!