BrumalHunter

Salutations. Hmm... When you said it's really long, I see you were not joking. Nevertheless, I shall free this work from the tyranny of the Green Room! Alright, normally, I ...

Salutations, once again. Your characterisation in this chapter was good as well, but I find your choice of genre puzzling. Naturally, I am not referring to the Action/Adventure part, but ...

Salutations. This chapter was as well written as all of your previous works that I have reviewed, but the highlight of this chapter was the excellent characterisation. In such a ...

Salutations. I have never read a Science Fantasy work before, but that does not mean I do not know what its characteristics are. I hope you do too. ;) The ...

Greetings. Oh, happy day! This chapter was directly after your previous one, so I am delighted that I have the good fortune of reviewing this one as well. :D I ...

Salutations. I must say, even though this is the first chapter I have read, I am already enthralled by your story. Even the very first paragraph is gripping, and immediately ...

Salutations, my friend. I am delighted to see that this chapter is longer than the last one, but also because it is of as excellent a quality as all the ...

Aaargh! (I'm going to deplete my limited knowledge of pirate greetings, soon.) For someone who only learned to speak English five years ago, you write very well. As that is ...

Avast, me hearty! (That probably sounded ridiculous, byt anyway...) The aspect of your chapter I enjoyed the most was your imagery. Your descriptive skills are very well-developed and you can ...

Salutations, my friend. Whereas your previous chapter was much longer than this one, the work you have presented is no less brilliant. However, I think that when you are to ...

Greetings. I am an avid reader of anything fantasy, but not all of the novels I have read were satisfactory, to say the least. Yours is a happy contrast to ...

Salutations. My word, I'm actually reviewing one of your chapters while it's still in the Green Room? Who would have thought? The main thing I am struggling to understand at ...

Greetings. :smt006 Hmm... This little detour was useful not only to Randall, but to the readers as well as Braxton, as both parties have been equally neglected in the sharing ...

Salutations, once more. Okay, the mannequin-servants is, to put it plainly, weird and totally unexpected. I have harboured the suspicion that Braxton's family is too dependant on the wizard for ...

Greetings. The incident with Braxton and the inn went mostly as I had expected, though I had not expected the fairy circle, so well done with that. Overall, your chapter ...