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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Other » Humor, General Re: Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five

    Salutations. I ordinarily do not review works with this much swearing, mature content, etc. but because it is Review Day, I suppose I shall. I respect that you do not ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Politics Re: Ascension Chapter 7- La Chevalier

    Salutations. I apologise for having to review this chapter with no former knowledge of how the story had progressed and developed, but that does not mean I cannot comment on ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Ignore this roleplay chiz

    Salutations. Now that the formalities are out of the way, I can say this: Oh my goodness! You do realise how long this is, don't you? I know you said ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 3: A Perfect Interrogation

    Salutations. Yay, this work is still in the Green Room - and you have an appendage! I missed that during the previous two reviews, but I only realised that it ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 3)

    Salutations. Finally, I have reached the third part! Just remember, Buggie, if you ever have anything you want me to review, just pop onto my wall and shout - I ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 2)

    Salutations. How have I not reviewed this yet? Would please tag me whenever you have released a new chapter? I often lose track of the novels I follow if I ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 3; Welcome to the Kingdom of Peace!

    Salutations, my friend. Before I start, thank you for that recommedation in the author's note - I really do appreciate it. I shall return the favour some day soon... ;) ...

    Nov 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 2, The right kind of lives.

    Salutations. The previous review was absolutely exhausting, so I hope you don't mind if I leave out the technicalities, such as spelling or language errors. There are two complete seasons ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Episode 1: Ryan Zekrom Sparker.

    Salutations! You will probably not remember me, but a few review days ago, I had commented on one of your chapters (or episodes, as I suppose I should call them), ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Seven

    Salutations, and a happy horrible review day to you! Ah, my last review for the day. I apologise that your work is one of the last few remaining, but at ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Anomalies: The Valkyrie File Chp 2 A New Friend

    Salutations, and a happy horrible Review Day to you! This is quite a short chapter, but you know what they say - short, but sweet. Will this chapter be too ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Dragon King Prequel (Part Two)

    Salutations, and a happy horrible review day to you! I am afraid I cannot truthfully say I know what is going on in this story, since I have not yet ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: The Redeemer

    Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! I always find stories about people rising higher than their circumstances very inspirational, being a romantic and full of ideals. Despite your not having ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: DrFeelGood's Story ...

    Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! I have seen that you have resumed your activity on YWS - yay! As soon as I read your work, I knew you had ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Copious Few (First 5 chapters)

    Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! When you mentioned that this is a collection of your first five chapters, I did not expect it to include five different characters. Well, ...

    Oct 26, 2014


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio