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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Other » Humor, General Re: Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five

    Salutations. I ordinarily do not review works with this much swearing, mature content, etc. but because it is Review Day, I suppose I shall. I respect that you do not ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Politics Re: Ascension Chapter 7- La Chevalier

    Salutations. I apologise for having to review this chapter with no former knowledge of how the story had progressed and developed, but that does not mean I cannot comment on ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Ignore this roleplay chiz

    Salutations. Now that the formalities are out of the way, I can say this: Oh my goodness! You do realise how long this is, don't you? I know you said ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 3: A Perfect Interrogation

    Salutations. Yay, this work is still in the Green Room - and you have an appendage! I missed that during the previous two reviews, but I only realised that it ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 3)

    Salutations. Finally, I have reached the third part! Just remember, Buggie, if you ever have anything you want me to review, just pop onto my wall and shout - I ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 2)

    Salutations. How have I not reviewed this yet? Would please tag me whenever you have released a new chapter? I often lose track of the novels I follow if I ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 3; Welcome to the Kingdom of Peace!

    Salutations, my friend. Before I start, thank you for that recommedation in the author's note - I really do appreciate it. I shall return the favour some day soon... ;) ...

    Nov 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 2, The right kind of lives.

    Salutations. The previous review was absolutely exhausting, so I hope you don't mind if I leave out the technicalities, such as spelling or language errors. There are two complete seasons ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Episode 1: Ryan Zekrom Sparker.

    Salutations! You will probably not remember me, but a few review days ago, I had commented on one of your chapters (or episodes, as I suppose I should call them), ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Seven

    Salutations, and a happy horrible review day to you! Ah, my last review for the day. I apologise that your work is one of the last few remaining, but at ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Anomalies: The Valkyrie File Chp 2 A New Friend

    Salutations, and a happy horrible Review Day to you! This is quite a short chapter, but you know what they say - short, but sweet. Will this chapter be too ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Dragon King Prequel (Part Two)

    Salutations, and a happy horrible review day to you! I am afraid I cannot truthfully say I know what is going on in this story, since I have not yet ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: The Redeemer

    Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! I always find stories about people rising higher than their circumstances very inspirational, being a romantic and full of ideals. Despite your not having ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: DrFeelGood's Story ...

    Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! I have seen that you have resumed your activity on YWS - yay! As soon as I read your work, I knew you had ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Copious Few (First 5 chapters)

    Salutations, and happy horrible Review Day! When you mentioned that this is a collection of your first five chapters, I did not expect it to include five different characters. Well, ...

    Oct 26, 2014


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