BrumalHunter

Salutations. As requested, I have arrived to provide you with a review! (Fortunately, I was actually in the mood for reviewing, otherwise it may have taken days for me to ...

Salutations. This is a rather short chapter, in comparison with your previous ones. To be honest, it seems more like the end of a chapter, rather than a chapter on ...

… I’m still reeling from the shock. I’ll be with you as soon as I’ve recovered. … Salutations. Wow, Charizard, that was… well, no adjective could do this chapter justice. ...

Salutations. Three days ago, you had asked me to review your newest chapter of this novel, and I kept being distracted (by our lovely conversations, our mutual SB, etc.), but ...

Salutations. You did not say what kind of reviews you prefer, so I shall simply quote parts I liked or think needs attention, and then explain why, whether it concerns ...

Salutations. Well, I always enjoy a well-written paranormal or supernatural story, and it seems your novel can become exactly that. My Legend: Red - correction Orange - suggestion Green - ...

Salutations. Well, I am not quite sure how to start this review, if I may be frank. When I read the title, I thought it would actually be an analysis ...

Salutations. It seems the previous reviewer has addressed the majority of the errors concerning plot, style, setting, etc. so I shall focus on the technicalities of your work instead. My ...

Salutations. I have not read your previous chapters, and for that I apologise. Nevertheless, if I see something worth mentioning, I shall do so. My Legend: Red - correction Orange ...

27778 words?! Forgive me: salutations. Here is a tip - there is no way anyone is reading this all the way through. That may sound disheartening, but it is the ...

Salutations. I have returned for the next part! Scene 4: The Ghost of Christmas Past makes an appearance. I like how you managed to portray her as enthusiastic and spontaneous ...

Salutations. A remake of "A Christmas Carol," eh? That's a rather ambitious task, but one I would be happy to review - even if you are on the other side. ...

Salutations. So, while I have heard of Power Rangers and watched it occasionally, I cannot say I follow the series and I have no idea about what the "Mighty Morphin ...

Salutations. Perhaps combining all four chapters were a mistake on your part - combining one and two, and then three and four would have been much better. That way, you ...

Salutations! Yay, Chapter Four has finally been released! However, you once again forgot to tag me. Fortunately, I was scrolling through the Green Room and noticed this. So... if you ...