Brownbomd

What's up! Glad you shared your poem! It has a few faults though, first off: what is this poem about? I get a small understanding of where you're going with ...

Hey brother, This article was good, at times. Other times, I felt as though, you didn't convey your point. It was as if I was reading chocolate milk that hasn't ...

Liked the poem, I share your enthusiasm but with soccer. This poem is very energetic and happy which is what poetry is all about! I love how you say "I ...

Hey, I just want to say a something about this work. Even though it is wonderful! the shambles that prop up cardboard houses First off, this quote it doesn't sound ...

You have a cool way of writing, like you have your own niche. Very pleasant poem. The moon's blood red And the sky is dead. Personally, I would not have ...

Hey home-slice, I'm coming down to earth to write a review. Just a small inconsistency in your writing when Peter asked, "Why is Peter Pan you're favorite book?" - How ...