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BrownMatter

  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Mollie

    Hello Redhood! My second time reviewing your work ^^ I'm sure it is a sequel or mostly related to your previous work "The stone man and the woman blob". This ...

    Aug 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Quench for Freedom

    Thank you so much for your review Spearmint. I have corrected the punctuations and typos as much as I could catch for now, thank you for pointing it out. As ...

    Jul 30, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Quench for Freedom

    Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me. And yeah, canva means canvas. Thank you though, I'll change it ^^

    Jul 29, 2025
  • Poetry » Technology, General Re: Reliable Sources

    Oh I see. Thank you! I didn't catch that at first. Now I see it

    Jul 28, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: A Kiss from Death

    Thank you so much!!! I loved your review! It's a good push for me. I love when people point out the things they loved about my work and give suggestions. ...

    Jul 24, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: A Kiss from Death

    Thank you for sharing your perception on my poem. I appreciate it ^^

    Jul 19, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: A Kiss from Death

    Thank you so much for your review! I will be expanding my vocabulary as you suggested. I hope it wasn't boring. Still, thank you very much ^^

    Jul 14, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: A Way Back | Chapter: 1

    Thank you for your review >,< I kinda in the middle of my exams that's why I haven't been able to write- but I'll continue soon. As the story continues, ...

    Jul 12, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Echo of the Protector

    Yess! I would love to ^^ There is a lot of mystery around here (not saying it's a bad thing) and I would love to see what exactly your idea ...

    Jul 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Life I Deserve Doesn't Exist

    Thank you for your comment. I'm actually a bi person, so I have been pretty active with the queer community for few year. The right for the queer community have ...

    Jul 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Life I Deserve Doesn't Exist

    Thank you so much for your support. I agree with your point. Tbh there isn't much to agree upon, that's the literal truth. I don't get how people get to ...

    Jul 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Veil of the Unclaimed - Somewhere Only I Know

    There were typos in the review >///< I hope it's not too confusing

    Jul 8, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Lightning of Color

    Thank you very much for your review. I loved the fact that you understood the poem perfectly. Tbh, most of the time even I don't understand what I write, I ...

    Jul 7, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Lightning of Color

    Thank you so much for your review. I'll try my best to keep improving and enjoy the process nevertheless. I do have one question- did you suggest that instead of ...

    Jul 7, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Echo of the Protector

    You're welccome :) It was kinda fresh to me, the open ending. It's a good take >.< I loved it

    Jul 6, 2025


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind