BrokenSoul

I like it. The picture that it paints is...wow! And the discriptive words are also really nice! I like the rhythm it has and the beat it keeps and the ...

This caught my attention the minute i looked at the first sentence! This is great.No, amazing. NO, INCREDIBLE!It was very heart htrobbing because you could feel your feelings. You rhymed....sure. ...

okay i am younger than everyone here that has replied and i know my reply wont really count but i dont care because this song is AWESOME! If i ever ...

okay i like the tune but the words honestly make no since to me! I am blonde but i get stuff because im a deep thinker but i dont get ...

:shock: very....awkward.....I LOVE IT! It is so weird that it's funny and people love funny! except for themeanie critics that are acting like it's a really BIG thing because it's ...

This son is really good for your first lyrics! I think it needs like a guitar solo or a piano solo or something but other than that i think it ...

okay first i would like to say AWESOME! second i would like to say I LOVE IT! Third i would like to say very deep fourth i would like to ...

okay i dont want to be the only one to critisize but i dont want to lie soo here it goes..... first you used the word "eachother" to much same ...

It was... Pretty good! just one problem. That isn't going insane.It's feeling that u have no place on this planet and u think ur goin insane. so...ya. It was really ...

I like it a lot! it is really deep and i can almost feel the pain that ur hart is pulsing out! It makes the poem have a life of ...

Despite what the grl below me says, YOU ROCK! it's awesome i can almost feel evrything u feel! i love how u just make it seem like it's easy! it's ...

hee hee! that is really good! it is really cute to! umm....... goshers i dont know what else to say other than that oh and what is that p word ...