My bittersweet blueberry waffles

by Echolair

Published September 3, 2008

Howdy! :D 'tis something i half-assed freestyled last night before i slept. I don't know why i write my poems in such an impulsive manner but oh to hell with it ^.^ Enjoy!

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I never saw the sun rise in my part of the world.

I never drank the cooling taste of amber burning in my tongue.

I never woke up to the haunting chattering of damned hotties nearby.

I never began to jot down a twinkling forever in my celestial page of phantasmagoria.

I never drew a picture that could launch a thousand artistic nincompoops.

I never loved a stranger I unfortunately did not know.

I never tricked my crush into grudgingly falling in love with the awesome ghost who is me. I may be lying but this IS my poem.

I never broke a promise. But i did break a finger. Your butterfinger.

I never told anyone how much i cry every night so I could smile for you the next day.

I never baked the starship cookies I once overheard you like.

But there is something that I won't say I never did...

I made blueberry waffles for you...

It's my favorite...

But you never really knew.










^^

CHASE

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xGraceex
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xGraceex wrote a review Review · Sep 22, 2008

I never told anyone how much i cry every night so I could smile for you the next day.


i think that is one of the most heartwarmimg things i have ever ard, it was so sweet! your poem was so cute, i loved it lol. It is so painfully truthful that it is almost embarrasing, like watching your mum cry for the first time, it was almost uncomfortable to read but i loved it all the same for its bluntness. its like reading a friends diary, or hearing someone else confessing soemthing they had done, if you know what i mean lol. sorry, im waffling - LOVED IT!

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BrokenSoul
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BrokenSoul wrote a review Review · Sep 3, 2008

hee hee! that is really good! it is really cute to! umm....... goshers i dont know what else to say other than that oh and what is that p word i forgot how to spell it but what does it mean? I like blueberry waffles but chocolate waffles are way better! u shood try it sumtime! well gotta go so buh bie! :D

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gaylegoh
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gaylegoh commented Comment · Sep 3, 2008

Cute. Annoying, but cute.



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