BrittanyNicole

Thank You Very Much Also! It really helped.:)

Thank You Very Much! :D I appreciate it.

Awe, thanks!:) & yes it does!

Thank you! I'm always getting mixed up on those 'your' and 'you're'. It helps alot. :)

:)Thanks. Maybe, i'll change that because it would flow better.

Thank you! I will get those two changed. I didn't even notice the misspelling or extra 'of'.

Thank you, the 'whip' was a typo, on my part. So, thanks for pointing that out. And thank you for all the information advice. I really appreciate it.

Your welcome! C:

Oh okay, that makes a difference. good job again.

Thank you also for your advice. :) I know some people get ticked off about criticism, but how are you going to know what needs improvement if you can't handle ...

Thank you very much! I will keep that in mind.

I think your works great, i don't see anything that's bad:D

Nice, I love it. :D Glad you messaged me to check it out. Your story has good details and punctuation.

Nice, flowy, realistic. I like how it talks about the Earth. truth is beyond the reach of humans. Yet the hopes are alive within our hearts that someday we'll come ...

Thank you!:) Tbh: I love your name(: