BreezySprout

What a wonderful poem! I love the vagueness of it, because it gives each reader a different perspective. For me, it feels as if you/the narrator is dissociating and feels ...

This poem hits hard, very well written! I love how each verse (?) has a time frame that’s getting smaller and smaller (year, month, week, etc), it makes it flow ...

What a wonderfully heavy read. This hits very deep for me, no pun intended. The imagery this invokes is overwhelming and this is written so smoothly. It’s a simple poem ...

I absolutely adore the quiet pain that this coveys, as well as the twinge of jealousy from the tomato plant. I also enjoy how the ending of the thought from ...

I love poetry that has jagged spaces or maintains a shape of some kind. Excellent work! I like the font change that happens after the first jagged space. This captures ...

This hit me hard. Poems don’t often make me tear up, but this one is very powerful. One thing I enjoy a lot is the metaphors for certain things and ...

I really like this poem! It has a nice flow and the rhymes are smooth. I also like how the poem, just like life, has no full stops. There are ...

I saw in your comment that you’ve reworked Aaron but I’ve not read anything of yours before so keep that in mind with this review :3 Overall, this seems pretty ...

This was a wonderful read! I’m sure this is because there are other parts I haven’t read, but parts of this is confusing to me. In the first section, it ...

Love this! What a wonderful read. Being taken in by the king and queen was a great thing for Josephine, even if for a reason other than she planned. Stealing ...

Wow! I love the twist towards the end of Carlos being a bit psychotic! It started out as a sweet, high school romance. I suspected that Carlos would try to ...