Boolovesyou

Hey Laura! James convulsed wildly. He screamed, a hoarse scream doused in grief that burned the back of his throat as it welled inside of Drop the of, especially if ...

Hey Deanie, I just got the feeling of reading a list... It had nice words, but not very poetic. And the only thing that I wanted to read was the ...

Hey Demoness, There were a lot of grammar errors. Say something that will once for all, Proove that I'm fighting for Love, 'cause then I'll kepp going till I fall. ...

Hey! Okay only caught one spelling mistake. To me. We're inseperable Inseparable ; Overall... I think the poem was incredible clique. It seems like the biggest girl problems anymore are ...

Hey! I liked this a lot it seemed a bit clique, but here are two lines that just seem forced. Blown out by the cold, hating winds of hell. Terrorized ...

Hey Deebee! I've seen you posting a lot of stuff lately! Good thing though! Okay only one grammar error. I am but a an useless wretch, a blind, selfish monster ...

Hey Twit! I only caught a few mistakes, but you should probably double check your grammar. Dinner is simple; curry with lots of bread and butter and a rice pudding ...

Hey, Charade. Your poem was cliche, and unique. Some parts I felt like I've heard or read them a bunch of times, while others actually caught my eye. Near the ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this poem! It was beautifully worded and easy to relate to in lots of cases. Okay only a few issues : Oh , how much regret ...

Hey coco! Congrats on this beautiful poem! I really like the way you showed a story, the beauty through the sadness all in one poem. I don't have much to ...

I don't want to be your one-month friend , Nor your back-up friend ! I don't want to be your last option, Just... want a true friend. You had so ...

Hey, Boo here! I liked your poem. I only have a few suggestions. 1.) Try some stanzas 2.) You put A LOT of grammar in your poem. Periods and commas ...

Hey, Littleprinces. I'm here to review for you today! I'm going to quote your story, and write in where I see issues or small problems. Even things I like. Here ...

Hey Deebee! First off I'll start with what I didn't like. I know this type of poem they usually don't put much grammar in, but in yours there are barely ...

Hey AmellaCogin! You asked for a review so here I am! This story was interesting, I like the shortness of it! I feel like some how you could put more ...