Bookmarker

Another great poem. :smt041 I liked the ending because it really gave a message. I also enjoy the way you stretch the poem out over the page. It looks like ...

I didn't really understand this at all. Who's Linda :?: What's wrong with not knowing the shade of the sky :?: Why is time passing by so quickly :?: I ...

WOW! :smt038 That was really beautiful! Some people said that the poem needed more emotion or detail, but that's all it needs. You should keep it the way it is ...

That was a really cool poem. 8) It did make me want to scream and shout! :smt091 (In a good way.) When you said, "One of the greatest time of ...

How much research did that take to write that poem? :smt024 WOW! That poem was so awesome that I'm almost suspecting that you stole it from a book. I'm definitely ...

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMM. I had no idea what was going on. It was about fireworks, right? It had a good plot and stuff, the cons of fireworks. You didn't express your feelings ...

No way! Awesome poem! :smt083 I liked the "drip drop" part. It described the sound of the rain and weather (ha ha :lol: get it? WEATHER!) the rain is soft ...

Whoah! Enough with the big words. :smt075 You don't have to sound smart or anything when you're writing (But of course, I can't help it. JK) Besides that, the story ...

Wow-E P-zowie! :D That was a totally awesome tidbit of your book. It made me want to cry, :cry: laugh, :smt082 and cry again :smt090 . I think that you ...

That was really creepy! :shock: It was so creepy that it was really good! :) Maybe you could add why you kissed the person though. Was it love or a ...

This was a beautiful poem, :smt038 but you didn't mention anything about the camera. Maybe you could add :smt024 *click* after every paragraph in your poem.