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Well I thought that was good. I really liked how you had the intro and stuff at the beginning. It would be weird if the story just started with people ...

This looks really good. I do have a few nitpicks, though: You say the word "procedure" a lot. You could use other words like process, method, or routine. The enhancements ...

OOH I was right and YEAH Brian's bye bye. :D I'm glad Brian is out of the picture (not that he needed to be) but it creates a whole new ...

Woah. :o This one is way more exciting than the last one. I cannot wait to find out who it was. I hope it's Brian. He's a meany. Anyway, back ...

OOH. It's turning out to be even more like the TV series Survivor. Fights and more "elimination". This peice was as good as the others. You used the "catching another ...

Wow! This one came fast. It was good, too. Jack is turning out to be really cool. And Brian is turning out to be a jerk. I like it. I'm ...

Nice job! This one was as good as the others. :D When you have a quote you should have everything else in the next paragraph. Except for the "he said" ...

I LOVED IT! :D:smt049 The story's crazy creativeness made it really interesting. I think you could end the story somehow, like "SPLAT" or "Then the flames came and quickly consumed ...

This was good! I read the first one and now this. I love the story that this is turning into. You describe things a little bit more. Like where the ...

This was a really great story! :smt003 I loved the imagination you brought into it. I think the beginning could have more information. Why was the character travelling alone? Who ...

That was a really good poem! :smt041 I just finished playing a pirate video game AND I'm looking at my pirate group stuff right now, so I pictured pirates saying ...

That poem was really cool. 8) The tornado came down and threw around some screaming people> :smt005 :smt044 :smt101 :smt091 :smt087 :smt089. Then all of a sudden the funnel cloud ...

This poem wasn't one of my favorites, but I was told that you wrote it at two in da mornin or some thing. It was still good! :smt081 You spell ...

That poem was really good! :smt041 I loved all of the black things you could think of! I didn't understand the ending though. :( This was the first post that ...

That was a really good poem. :smt001 The last stanza messed up the rhythm though. What the words said helped it. I hate :smt096 the whole stressed and unstressed syllable ...