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Re: Confession of a troubled teenager
Wow! Just Wow!! Your poem really touched me! Im guessing you are the troubled teenager in this passage. I found the beginning of your poem rather mysterious and dark and ...
Aug 6, 2013 -
Re: Boredom
Hey there fortis, I really love your essay! I was smiling the whole way through! You are completely right! I do the exact same thing! I like the layout and ...
Aug 6, 2013 -
Re: The Seed
hi bookworm here to review your work. I really like your idea. I think it was very creative and imaginative of you to write from the point of view of ...
Aug 4, 2013 -
Re: The Sun
Hey there whitepencil, Your story was spectacular! Absolutely and utterly amazing! It was exciting, hectic and crazy and cool all at once. You really drew me in and kept me ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: Humanity
This a brilliant poem! I completely agree with your frame of mind on humanity. This reminded me of the Michael Jackson song "Man in the Mirror" what was it... Oh ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: I Once Believed
First of all welcome to YWS and.....Wow!! Just WOW!! Somebody pinch me! That was incredible!! Absolutely sensational!! (And this is coming from someone who has no idea what-so-ever about poetry) ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: She.
Hey there justthisonce As I was reading the passage a lot of questions sprung to my head like "Who was this mysterious caller?", "Why did she rush to speak to ...
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: The Simulation
Hi there golden rebel Your short story was very interesting. You have a wide imagination. You definitely persuaded me to read on. I was as curious as the young boy ...
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: Breathing
Hey there I could really relate to the character in your short story. Like many people, I have been in a similar situation and the way you described her emotions ...
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: The story's all over you
Hey there Klara I really enjoyed your work and didn't realise this had been written by someone whose second language is English!! The paragraph that starts with "I dream about ...
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: Trains
hey there Carina You are extremely gifted and talented writer! I liked the way that you personified the train as if it was alive and breathing and I like the ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: Timba and James
hey there Blackwood I really enjoyed your short story although it had an unhappy ending. It was written remarkably well!! I like the way that your story is unpredictable. I ...
Jul 18, 2013