BondGirl007

Hello I am Bondgirl, and I will be your reviewer today. Now I will warn you in advance, I will be quite harsh. I'm only trying to help so please, ...

Tell me what you want to grow up and be? A quite tough question they once asked me. I asked some peers about their pick, But their underlying motives made ...

Oh totally write more! I love it already! A little bit on the short side but a great beginning Writing it from the "Witch's" perspective is really creative. :D Good ...

Hello I am Bondgirl, but you can call me Hope. I will be reviewing you today! This is not an attack on your writing, just my own personal observations. :D ...

Wow this was really good! I am doing a Cinderella story as well, but this is great! I just sat down and read the whole thing! All I can say ...

Appearing a ‘goldfish’ is the last thing that I want to occur; gulping the air blankly as though it might feed me the answer I don't really think this line ...

This is a good story, it does need some tweaking though. "Hi Mom. I will be heading upstairs. Do you need anything from me?” My voice sounded angel-like as if ...

Your mind is full of doubt and you know your doing wrong. But your afraid to turn off the tap, you know you're not that strong. Your should be you're, ...

This is an over all good song, try spacing the lines so that its not all clumped together. Oh and label the chorus. To me it sounds more like a ...

1) It stretched its hand out, touched my face it was cold Shivers ran down my back, It had come to get my Gran years ago, And now it wanted ...

"She straightened and ran a wet hand through her greying hair. She gazed at the headstone with the strangest expression. Her eyes were cool as she said: “You always were ...