BondGirl007

Hey Jas! So I've reviewed literally almost everything you've ever posted, and I am amazed how much you've grown as a writer. You've improved so much since you first joined, ...

Greetings fellow 007! Bond here to review your poem! So first of, capitalize! In poetry you follow pretty much the same rules as when writing stories. Capitalize the beginnings of ...

Hey Madd! I saw the title and was reading before you could say "A martini shaken, not stirred." I as YWS's resident Bond nut, feel it is my duty to ...

Okay well now I'm never going to eat cake again... But the biggest problem is the rhythm. You don't have a consistent pattern which throws off the poem. Sometimes you ...

I’m Jessica Cleave. I’m nine, and this is my story. First off this is a very boring way to start off a story, the beginnings of stories are very important, ...

Okay, I'm going to be straight with you. This needs a lot of work, and I hope I don't sound mean in my review, because I'm trying to help, okay? ...

The mist was cold in the city , it prowl ed around the streets like a hungry dog. People had began to circle around the Square. A large, preened man ...

I must say I loved this xDD. A lot. It would make a great kids book if it were illustrated and added onto a little bit. Right now it's very ...

Okay, well I've read this story before. Not this exact story just the plot line. Girl loves a guy who's a big jerk, she has a best friend who's a ...

The sun painted Leah’s eyelids pink as she lay on the cool grass. She watched as the pink grew darker when a cloud passed in front of it, blocking its ...

I remember when I was little , b efore any of my real life started. The days I spent doing nothing ... n othing but playing and running around with ...

Her stunning face ran through my mind that made me feel crazy like hell. Crazy as hell? Before I could get into her room, a tall and dark-haired doctor used ...

Hi there Luvzi! I thought this was a very cute story, based on a movie I used to watch all the time when I was younger. Now I love your ...

Hey there Irish! So the biggest thing this story is in want for is description. I want to be able to picture the clearing, the woods, and especially the dark ...

So at first I was confused about what was going on, but I love how by the end I know exactly what's happened. I've never read a poem about anything ...