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Severely Noted. I will edit this as well as I can

Awesome

Well someone clearly likes them some Dungeons and Dragons

oh cool!

I might be wrong I've never read any of the previous chapters to this story but isn't it about a girl who discovers a prophecy sixty five years late?

Oh my god. I read the title wrong. All this time I was thinking it was trials of a master Chief. {face palms}

on second thought now that I think about it this story could use a bit more pacing and better descriptions.

Sweet

This entire first chapter seems like a river of flowing crystal clear that I mean It's pretty cool. Nothing amazing or godlike just simple world and character building. You perfectly ...

Indeed, although It seems kinda similar to the movie "Split" it does seem like a pretty interesting read. Can't wait for more

sorry i did not actually mean that I JUST Showed that to my friend and he posted that. by all means you are a good reviewer and ,I hope you ...

fuck you nigga

Noted, I'll do all I can to make it better

Normal review: Good gravy sauce you handled this story amazingly(I'm so cheesy I have no idea how you did it but you managed to handle romance much better in your ...

By the grammar problems I meant the google translate stuff at the first end. Sorry I wasn't very clear