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Thanks for your review! :D This is actually from the antagonist's PoV, so on the other side, there are many more characters on the other side. But I'll certainly take ...

It appears that Italian and I were reviewing this at the same time. I apologise if I've repeated anything as I probably started reviewing literally moments before he posted it! ...

...rereading this, I felt that I was interpreting the poem if anything. I tried, I tried xD

Also - good luck! :3

Thank you so much for the review, Misty! It really helped and I'm glad you pointed all those things out - I *knew* there was something wrong, but I couldn't ...

Thanks for your review, Soni! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, I didn't like that stanza too either, but I have a few ideas for it. How would you suggest ...

Thanks for your review, Charlie! ^_^ I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I completely understand you about the "tipping". I'll change that now! Funnily enough, I never thought of that ...

...Ignore this version too. >_> I need the delete button back! XD

Gah. Ignore this version - the one on the top is the newer. If only I could delete this.

Thanks for the review, Sion! :) Yes, I think I will ditch the rhyme scheme. Not a good idea xD

Well. All of the spots I thought could be improved I pointed out in the gDoc. I can't say anything else. I love it. Keep writing, Misty. It's great!

xDDD Thanks for the review, Alz. Oh, don't worry! It wasn't harsh at all; I'm glad you pointed out what you pointed out :) I'll definitely get rid of the ...

Thanks for the review, Musica! The poem is, yes, about two lovers who ended up in either hell or heaven. Thanks again!

Dreamy! Thanks so much :3 Thanks for that. I'm not sure about 'crashes' though, but I'll get my thesaurus and find a similar word :D

Aww, thanks Saga. I didn't expect this sort of response :D