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  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: The Shadow Man

    FFHey, Be! I'm here to review :) ...What can I say? Wow. That was excellent! I could literally feel my heart beat faster as I read on. The story was ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Brotherhood, Chapter One

    Hey, Omar! I'm here to review... again xD Would you mind a good shredding? ;) I'll be extra harsh for you today. Pacing: It goes way too fast. Slow down! ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled Novel- Prologue

    Heya Devan! I'm here to review for you today. Thoughts: Short, yet intriguing. I really want to know what happens next. The character seems thoroughly frightened and although at times ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The People of the Core: Chapter 1: The Assignment

    Hey there! I'm here to review. First thoughts: I liked it! I'm interested to see what happens next and clearly, something interesting is going to happen. However, there was a ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: The Pick of the Bunch (may change) Prologue

    Hey Toby! Here as requested, since exams are (finally) over! Thoughts: Not bad! :) I'm intrigued to know about what happens next, not only because I want to understand who ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, Satire Re: When James Met Adrienne

    Muuuuuurt! About... 6 months overdue? XD Glad to see you had the courage to post it though! *puts on reviewing hat* Overall thoughts: I love it! Definitely worth the wait. ...

    Jun 8, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Logs Of Jeremy Edwards Ch.2 (WIP Re-Write)

    Hey Mono! Here to review as requested. Impressions: Nice! Fast paced and full of action, just like a good war novel. I like how it's set in the future, adding ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Girl Who Cried Defeat, Chapter One

    Hey Celty! This is like the 4th time I've rewritten this. FOURTH. XD It's annoying, but it doesn't matter: I'm sure it'll work this time. (or not) First impressions:

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Never

    Hey there! I'm here to review this for you. This will be short, however. Nice, but short. It was a bit too short for me because I didn't really understand ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Endless Fields and Emerald Leaves

    Ceramy! Poet-tree review time xD I thought it'd be worth practising so you can be my guinea pig. Or, should I say, Guinea-Pusheen. Anyway. First impression: What a lovely place! ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Stable Boy

    Cerrrrramy! I'm here to review. As you know, I suck like hell at reviewing poetry so bear with me xD Impressions: I like it! :3 It says a story in ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Breaking Free: Chapter 10

    Mama Mamma Maaaama! Final chapter! *Throws all the fish* First impression: xDDDD Aaaaaaawkward! Lily is incredibly nosy and poor Ksenia having Vladimir suddenly turn up in her room! I'm loving ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Breaking Free: Chapter 9

    Mama Mama Mama! *offers some blue-fin tuna* I'm here... yet again. XD Impressions: Wow, what a *lucky* escape! She just made it ^^ Thank gosh xD This chapter was hilarious ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Breaking Free: Chapter 8

    Mommy! *throws sushi* I'm here again and wow, I'm loving it more and more! So much awesomeness! Impression: Write. More. Now. XD I'm really enjoying this and I'm trying to ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Breaking Free: Chapter 7

    Mama Q! (Do you like shrimps? I have no fish :P) I'm here again to review. First impression: Ooh! Plot developments for the win. She's in her new camp now ...

    Jun 3, 2012


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