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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Untitled

    Hey, Snow! Here as requested :3

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Ten Negative Signs That You're A Writer

    Hei Hei! :} Long time no see. XDD I thought this was hilarious and very true! I can really empathise with a lot of things that you talk about. I ...

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Horror Re: Clockwork Hearts [extract]

    Hey Twit! Here as requested. I really liked this piece! It was very vivid and descriptive with wonderful descriptions during the scene. I thought it suited the piece really well, ...

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Battalion Trilogy #1 - The First Chapter (Novel-in-Progress)

    Hey there, Bradley! Welcome to YWS! First impressions: I can't say that I was quite expecting that to happen to the reporter at the end! Your writing totally reminds me ...

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The High Witch's Niece

    Hey, Magnus! Here as requested. I loved this piece! It had a lot of suspense, it was very intriguing and it was generally well-written. (I thought it was nearly faultless, ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Rholtaii Heritage - Chapter 4

    Here again, Polinka! Woo! Answers at last :D I'm glad that not all the questions that we had were answered. Now things make a lot more sense to us. I'd ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: The Rholtaii Heritage - Chapter 3

    Hey, Polinka! Blues again. Once again, I liked this. I can't say that it's your strongest chapter though but that doesn't mean I didn't like and enjoy it. I like ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: The Rholtaii Heritage - Chapter 2

    Hey, Polinka! I know you technically requested for a review on your first chapter but it was excellent and any flaws in it had been pointed out by previous reviewers ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: Destiny - Part 4

    Hey, Lycando! Here as requested - sorry for being late with this. (I feel like I reviewed this already because it seems familiar. Maybe it went down on the database ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Son's Father

    Hi there, Pucker! Here as requested. What an interesting thing to write about! My parents didn't meet in a way that was hilarious/exciting/intriguing/true romance book fashion but I always have ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dear Lorraine

    Hey Devan! Sorry for taking a while on this. Finally here as requested. ...Wow. Wow. I've literally stayed here for five minutes, utterly shocked. I totally did not see that ...

    Dec 21, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The House Up On Top The Hill

    Hey there, Senshi! Here as requested. :) I quite liked your story - well done! Your description was excellent and you kept my interest I thought there were a few ...

    Dec 15, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: Hey! You lost?

    Hi, Clarity! I'm a little rusty since I've reviewed so apologies for that. Let's get started - and apologies if I seem too harsh :) Sometimes, I quite like stories ...

    Dec 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Old

    Hi there, Skins! Here as requested :3 You seem to have a couple of reviews so I apologise if I've repeated something that's already been mentioned. xD I really liked ...

    Oct 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: -A Fire Within-

    Hey there, Carrie! Here to review this for you today. This was a nice chapter. It revealed a lot about the world of the character, the way he thinks and ...

    Jul 28, 2012


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