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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Dirty Little Secret Chapter 1

    Hi there taylorchu! Let's dive straight into the review. :D I am Ellie Darwin, I have brown hair and brown eyes. I'm kind of tall but I don't care. The ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Angel (Chapter 1)

    Alice! Bluesy here, as promised! :) I'm going to make this a really quick review because I have to go soon. xD So I just read it and so far, ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

    Hey, Skins! Bluesy here :D Sorry for being really late - I've been really busy lately. Anyway! Firstly, there's a remarkable improvement from last time - the writing itself feels ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Fading - Chapter One

    Hey, Roundsquare! Here as requested. Allow me to drive straight in! Overall, I liked it - I like where you're going with the story and the description here. It's intriguing ...

    Jun 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: FEAR [new chapter 3]

    Hey, Gaurav! Here as requested. :) Actually, just to let you know, I haven't read the other critiques so I may repeat what has been said already. I won't focus ...

    Jun 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Practicing for exams - The Wife

    Bobbeh! Here as requested for a shredding ;D Here goes! Okay: The first thing I really would've liked to see a bit more was description of their facial features themselves. ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Twenty point 1 of The Lost Legend - The Seventh Blade

    Hey, Nether! Blues here. *stretches rusty reviewing muscles* I liked your story - I found interesting and i'm definitely intrigued to know more about their world. He seems like an ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Olivia

    Hey, Taylor! Here to review :) I liked this! I thought it was intriguing and I do wish it was expanded into a story. You've got us hooked to something ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Heavy Rain!

    Hey, Mystery! Here to review for you :) Ahw. That's sweet! :3 I thought it was a cute story and I love how it all traced back to him at ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Supernatural Re: Face On The Wall

    Hey, Questio! Here as requested. :) I liked this :3 It was sweet and cute and that character is adorable! You have a lot of reviews already, so I'll keep ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Day I Was Still Alive, Prologue

    Hey, Amélie! Bluesy here :D So I really liked this! It was very intriguing and I'm hooked to the story. Have you posted more of this? Onto the review! She’d ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Bolognese Sandwiches

    Caaaaaaaaadi! :D Challenge story! You'll be pleased to know that I finished mine with like 1 minute to spare. Literally. xD I love your writing Cadi! Your dialogue felt like ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Notes Between Pages Part 1

    Hai Senshi! Really sorry about the late review, but here as requested. :) I liked this! I was very intrigued at the beginning and it was interesting. Well done! Onto ...

    Jan 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Satire Re:

    MURTY. Not only that. A MURTY STORY. Muuuuurt! So glad to see you writing a short story :3 I loved it, too! It was very sweet and cute and just ...

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Untitled

    Hey, Snow! Here as requested - and sorry for the mishap just there. xD I liked this. I thought it was short and sweet and I loved the scene with ...

    Jan 13, 2013


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