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Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Three
The end of this chapter is so surprising! I really feel bad for Bluejay and Stormcloud....... :( And again, you made a perfect chapter. I can stop complimenting on your ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Two
Awesome!! This story is really giving me a feeling. After I read the last sentence, I began to get excited. What is going to happen next? Is what I thought. ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Kidnapped!!!
You really described what was happening to the girl- I love it! The only thing that caught my eye was that the last rhyming words "saved" and "enslaved" didn't really ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter One
Nice long chapter! Unlike mine- which are pretty short- yours is long, descriptive, and enjoyable for everyone. If I got to choose to read a book I wrote or a ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: If I Had Wings
The rhyming is great! It would be nice to have the last part rhyme, but the poem was so good, why bother? I really do think it is fantastic. In ...
Apr 6, 2014