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Re: A Not-So-Normal Study Abroad Trip
I'm actually going to Israel for three weeks on a medical mission trip, to work with a group called Shevet Achim in Jerusalem. I leave May 4, so in about ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: An Apology and a Curse.
I'm so, so sorry that things are so difficult for you. :( I admire you for putting this out here for all to read. It feels wrong to critique something ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The Burning of Nations
Wow. Just.... WOW!! :D This is incredible. The premise is intriguing, an interesting concept. As qtbubblegirl said, it makes you feel very patriotic! Your descriptions are amazingly vivid. This is ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: How to save your life, Chap. 1/Part. 1: I'm alive
Everyone else has already covered pretty much everything that I noticed about grammar, word choice, etc. So I'll just say: Wow. :shock: This is really interesting. Your prologue was great; ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Hacking YWS - I
Cute, and very amusing. Alyson222: wtf do u mean no chtspek? Hee! I do use chatspeak on forums, but I keep it to a minimum and make sure that it ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: You Do Not Belong Here
Wow. I can't think of anything else to say except...wow. This is an amazing piece of work. The descriptions are wonderfully vivid, and the story is raw, powerful, and gripping. ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
Wow. What can I say? There's nothing to say except....I'm sorry. I am so sorry that you had to go through this. It's not right at all, and NO ONE ...
Feb 14, 2010