BlueJayWalker10

Hello! Friendly neighborhood reviewer Jay here, back from the dead. I would like to begin this review off with: holy somokes, dude. Very well written! I have very few critiquing ...

Hey there! Jay here, for a review, as per your request. So far, you don't seem to have too many hiccups in your work, but we'll work through the issues ...

Hello there! I'm here to review your story, as per your request. Hope I can do a satisfactory job. I haven't been very active these past few months. Grammar N' ...

Hey there! It seems I'm a bit late to the review party, eh? Well, I've got an excuse--I've been under the weather these past couple weeks and I just got ...

Hello! Jay here to review your story, as per our agreement. The Review smiles, smiles and more smiles stitched across their faces because that’s what he wanted. So, I have ...

I think the fact that this is apparently all a true story is hilarious. Let's get to the review! Grammar N' Stuff Its nothing its just your new shower gel.[/color] ...

I saw a story named "Firelight Chat" and thought, "Well I have to read it now. . . The band my sister was in for IMA was Fireside Chat." And ...

Quick note; I'm coming in mid-story here, so don't me if I make any mistakes on plot or anything. Grammar N' Stuff So far, there have been few mistakes. One ...

Hello, there! Here to review the second chapter, as per your request. ^.^ This time I can actually get it out within the month of your request. xD Let's get ...

'Ello there, Far. Well then. That was unexpected. Not even did that happen in Bands of Mourning, and you know how Brandon loves to flip all cliches on their faces ...

Hey! So, I've finally found the time between tests, (both school and medical), concerts, and my sister graduating from BYU to review this. Sorry it took so long! Grammar 'N' ...

Hello there! Jay here, come to review this as per your request. Sorry it took me so long! I had state testing and was a little caught up in everything. ...

Well then. That sure seems interesting. I'm excited to read more! Ryan Wright and Valerie White. TOTALLY not foreshadowing, haha. Miss Perfect and Mister Deadpool, eh? Sounds like an "opposites ...

Hey, Jay here, your friendly neighborhood critic! WOW UM That escalated quickly. Grammar 'N' Stuff I don't really think that'd be necessary for me to do, because you did the ...

Hey, Jay here, your friendly neighborhood critic! I saw this name and immediately thought: I have to review this. And I must say, this gave me a good laugh! Onward ...