BlueGlow

Love this work! Hope to see more from ya!

Thanks for the review and thanks for understanding the message! In the future I will make sure to include better punctuation. Thanks for taking time to read, review, and otherwise ...

Hey thanks! Glad I nailed the symbolism as that was a huge focus! Thanks for taking to time to read and review!

Despite the short length of this poem I love it! It feels as if it came right out of a fantasy novel perhaps it was a legend passed down for ...

Thanks for reviewing! To adress part of your criticism: there is no story line. It is just a garble of text as that emphasizes my experiences within the realms of ...

This really is something special. I hope to see more from you in the future!

I will have to give it a read! Most of my inspiration comes from a mixture of T.S. Elliot, H.P. Lovecraft, and a dash of Kingdom Death.

Alright, thanks for the suggestion! I will take a look at prose writing when I get the chance. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Yeah some of the lines are slightly nonsensical, I do agree they could use some polishing. I will take these into consideration when I do my next edit of this. ...

Good to know!

Thanks for taking the me to read and review!

Thanks for the review! I am well aware of the often times rough sentence structure. I wrote this in a half hour for challenge that someone put me up to. ...

Fun Fact: These were all written by hand on notecards that I kept in my jacket pockets and would write on whenever the urge struck. Also, for some reason the ...

Thanks! I'm glad that some pieces of this stuck out! Thanks for reading and thanks for reviewing!

No problem! I will keep an eye on your future work!