BlueGlow

Great work!

Great work!

No problem!

Glad to hear it!

Thanks for reviewing again! Some of this would require background knowledge of my neighborhood as it references it. Perhaps I will fix it in a future revision. Daily uploads might ...

Hey don't worry about sounding mean, criticism is a catalyst for improvement. This work could use a revision to fix a few of the peculiarities. I needed to expand some ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you managed to understand the message I was getting at!

I'll take it into consideration! Thanks for reviewing!

Thanks for the criticism! I definitely felt like those lines could be improved and I may do a revised draft of this in the future. You suggestions were actually really ...

Thanks for the kind words! If I decide to write more, which is kind of inevitable at this point, I'll make sure to tag you! Thanks for reviewing!

Gotcha, I'm still attempting to get to grips with punctuation in poetry. Your perspective on the matter of staying in one's comfort zone is interesting. I'll work on improving some ...

Gotcha. Thanks for the clarification

I suppose that's part of the fun of sharing your writing. Diverse perspectives shed new light on your work.

Hey thank you for taking time to read and write an insightful review. i might revise this and fix some of the kinks you mentioned. I'm glad you enjoyed this ...

This is an elegant poem in the sense that it is simple yet conveys quite a lot. Your use of symbolism is spot on and the comparison you make really ...