BlueDaisy2018

Hey infiniterectangles. I wish you would respond to my review! The offer stands until you are ready to take it! Let me know!

I added a scene (scene 6) I added a few things to scenes 1 and two and I did some subtle changes up until scene seven. I really wish you ...

I changed Betsy-->Millie and Edith-->Trudy as well as edited a few scenes. I realized that the relationship taking off so quickly without getting to know the characters first was a ...

And the other way around as well.

In the US, people use commas instead of periods to denote the number placement. Just an FYI.

The setting is a school in the early 1900s btw

What would you suggest when making each scene have better structure? I've written a lot of plays in the past, but I am particularly struggling with carrying this story. Do ...

PLEASE READ THIS!!! Hey guys! This is ACT I of my play. I have no idea what to call it, so after reading it please leave a name I could ...

sorry for the resubmit. accident.

Hey! I hope you are having a wonderful day today! THis writing is...wow...and very passionate. I am so sorry about your crap "friends" and your depressed heart, but in and ...

the overall story was good not goo. sorry!

I know that kissing goodbye doesn't work that way, but she wants him to be hers one more time before she has to let go of him. She is wishfully ...

I know exactly what a glioblastoma is and does because my dad had one for two years and eventually died. And in the early stages and on some medications, this ...

My name isn't actually Winston, unfortunately. %uD83D%uDE2D But this is a character I used to represent that people aren't always on the inside what they are expected to be on ...

It's called "Remembering the Call" because Tracy is remembering her past life per say and remembering the way it was. And she kisses him to let him go. You know ...