Bloodsrain

I like it. I honestly feel like I am getting a true form of spring almost? The writing is a very warm, spring like feel. Of course, poetry is always ...

Well, I read through it, a bit confused, but I think I got a general understanding of it. The story being a focus on this academy that embodies the attributes ...

Well, the story is obviously a more darker side of poetry, which isn't exactly a bad thing, if anything, its a very refreshing thing to see. I feel like the ...

The story its self is alright, the writing is fine for the most part, and there isn't too many huge issues, but, i'll try to give some criticism, since, its ...

An interesting part 1 to the chapter. Iv'e read a few of the chapters here, and I find the story quite interesting. Things I like are the descriptive nature of ...

There was a few spelling errors, but none of them were glaringly too obvious. Just read through it again, and make sure to keep a close eye on it. I ...

There is a lot going on here in a short jaunt. I'm now kinda interested in this world you have written now of these Wretches. I am not sure if ...

I like this poem a lot. It really shows the clash of how the German people and the Jewish were really, almost the same, but both suffered from it. Jewish ...

Well, uh, it could use some work, i'd say. It has a lot of problems, in that, its got a lot of grammatical errors. I feel like, it's more of ...

I myself am Irish, and it's kinda heart warming to read a poem about it. Its hard to be almost like you aren't apart of your own country, but, its ...

A few things need some work, but, for a first draft, its good. Formatting is a bit odd, such as how some " " are turned into ' or aren't ...

I enjoy the writing, the first person perspective in my opinion isn't used enough. A few suggestions though, the wording in a few sentences is a bit odd, but thats ...