Blink

Ha! I came across this the other day, sorry for not reviewing :wink: ignorant about the fact That doesn't seem right to me. Perhaps just 'of', so cutting off a ...

Ye, I agree. I'm reading Great Expectations for English... I hate it. I was going to read it before I knew we were studying it. It's just killed it--analysing every ...

Aside from changing... Kim, i love you. ... to a capital I, I don't know what there is to say. What exactly are you trying to show here? I don't ...

Hey Eimear! I don't think I've read anything of yours in a while... In my dreams I took a train last night, and beheld old London’s ancient lights. That first ...

Marketing, that seems to be it. If the entire world knows about it then I'm sure he will find a few fans somewhere. Eragon, Roran, and Saphira attack the Ra'zac ...

It's back =P This thread looks lonely. The crack in the pretty wooden door where she had punched it stood as testament [s]to this[/s]. ever since she’d been thrown in ...

A plan :shock: He reacted with the instincts bred into him during his seventeen years alive , and covered himself with his hands, feeling as though he had just woken ...

I'm tempted to say Lord of the Rings. ARGHHHHHHHHHHH! Take it back! EDIT: Sorry, just recovered. I have to say Eragon.... *shivers* Characters are flat, bad author and it's like ...

Hey Unknown! Here by promise! Firstly, you might want to do a few more reviews since I noticed you have posted 3 pieces up, and we ask you do two ...

Here I am, as requested :) A cry of surprised pain was almost drowned out by the crack of gunshot. A few things: The use of 'a cry of surprised ...

This thread looks lonely and I need to procrastinate, so some very nitty picks first: blood stained 'bloodstained', one word :wink: He couldn’t think and he couldn’t see and his ...

Hello! I stood outside the rotten , iron gate looking into the old abandon manor. Several things wrong with this sentence I am sorry to say. Firstly, there is the ...

My advice--space out the paragraphs and put it in separate threads. You can't expoect people to keep coming back and reviewing. Oh, and I just thought I would point out: ...

Hi! Well, I'll go through the nitpicks first: Monday at the office was a Monday like any other. It sounds friendly and easy flowing but this is a very clichéd ...

Well, grammar has been pretty much saturated, so I will give my thoughts on the story... It’s my best friend because it’s mine. I tell you what make this a ...