Blink

Hello TSun. Blinkster here. Cynic alert. Again, I awoke to the diced sunshine plastered on to my ceiling. But now, it wasn't to the sound of the birds, or the ...

Hey! Before I review this, I just want you to remember YWS' 2:1 ratio for when you post things for critiquing. That way, you can guilt people into reading your ...

Hello! Mind if I take a look...? :P The Chill crept its way This is annoys me because Chill does not usually constitute a metaphor for frost, but just as ...

Heya, Zaddie! Nice to meet you. =] My heart was leaping inside my chest . T his couldn’t be happening ; it was too amazing. Gah! Comma murder. Let me ...

Hey! Well, welcome to YWS! Why not drop by the welcome forum and say hello? Just in case you didn't know, you're supposed to do two reviews (at least 250 ...

Hello. =] I'm here to review, surprisingly. I think the ending of this poem is the best; the repetition works well, and although the rhythm could do with a little ...

Hello. =] I. NITPICKS As a general note, remember that grammar in poetry is no different to that of prose; that is to say, only put capital letters at the ...

Hey, Sarah! Welcome to YWS! Why not introduce yourself in the welcome area? =] I will review this, but please bear in mind the 2:1 review:submission ratio in the YWS ...

Hey Mars! Blinkster here. =] familiar sounds of the intensive care unit buzzing in my ears, concentrating so I could differentiate between them. The way that you've written this makes ...

Hey! I'm so sorry about the time it's taken me to get back to you. I hope the review is still helpful to you. I’ll never forget you a nd ...

Hello. This looked lonely so I thought I'd come give it some company. Ok, I won't lie--this confused me a lot. It felt to me like a long list of ...

Hey there! I'll take a look at this for you. :wink: I loved the format of having us believe Grammar Remember that, in poetry, not every line has to begin ...

Hey Echolair! Nice to meet you. =] To begin with, I liked the character development that came out of here (religion, desire, sadness etc) and the emotions were certainly there. ...

I'm not the first person to review it for once. XD eighteen twenty three is six twenty three Please throw in some dashes or hyphens or something. Too many numbers, ...

You caught me at a good time because a) I was looking for something to review and b) I was just reading about Lucid Dreaming for my presentation on it. ...