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Re: O Holy Night
HEY :) First off this was so refreshing! On here you see all these cynical poems/stories about Christmas how everything is terrible and bad. You brought to life the true ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Suprise
Hey geeky :) You know how much I adore your writing. Poetry, stories, songs, anything really. So you can already guessed how much i LOVED THIS!!! But as any good ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: thread spools and statistics were never good therapists
Hey! I really liked your work! Although I personally would have done a few thing different. The very first line I would have put a comma or possibly a period ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Atop the Christmas Tree.
Hey! I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It's such a different way to look at Christmas. Even when I read the title I though "hmm this is probably going to ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet of the Soul
Hello! First off I loved it! I could really sense your emotion in this piece! It really came to life for me. Although I defiantly think you could reword a ...
Dec 16, 2014