Blanketman

Amazing story. I love how detailed, and colorful you make each scene, which just adds to the whole idea of the story. I like how well The story flows, and ...

Well that took a turn near the end. "Your mom died and you're adopted". A little harsh. Anyways, I really like the story. The ending especially, when he becomes a ...

I really like the plot of this story. I like how the tall woman takes her in, and feeds her. I don't like however that she tries to teach her ...

I like the main idea of the story, and how the kid learns about the difference of the rich and the poor. I also really like how in the end, ...

Bruh....that ending tho. Well, it was a great story. There were lots of small grammatical errors, but those are easy fixes. I like the flow of the story, and how ...

This is a really great story. I like when she runs away, realizing she had no plan, an then returning home, only to run away again. I also like how ...