Bittersweet

Well... I have nothing really original to say. It was overall a very nice poem that people like me, who have moved from a place they loved very much, can ...

Hello! I'm just gonna jump right in... Children silent, unpicked violet. Scalded tongue and tension violent. You should probably change violet in here to another flower. The closeness between 'violet'

Hello! Okay, first off, I'd like to say that these few lines... You can't see them, but you hear. They can't hear you. Do they see? ...are kind of awkward ...

It's pretty good--you definitely captured each of the characters' personalities well. The thing that bugs me is when is this happening? Why has Jacob been unhappy for so long? Where ...

I like this. :) After reading the Twilight series, I always wondered how being a child and a vampire would be. I like the way you tell it; it's very ...

I'm not quite sure what to say. kittykat pretty much summed it up. Wow. You're an excellent writer. I loved every bit of this piece. It went in so deep--it ...

I pretty much agree with everything ashleylee had to say. The beginning was a little confusing. The transition from childhood to adulthood could have been smoother. There are a few ...

Okay, first things first. We need to get through all of the writing mistakes and stuff. “Stop, you can’t heal him,” A voice came behind me. I turned on my ...

First, I'd like to say that this is an excellent piece of writing. Second--you really need to somehow seperate each character's part of the story with either a line break ...

Infinitely impressed. I've been reading a lot of things on here and nothing compares to this! Wonderfully written; I felt my stomach flipping out when it got to three. It ...

I'm curious to get to know the relationship between Emilie and Phillip. The scandals are probably a no-brainer, of course, with the baby thing. I'm mildly interested. It has potential, ...

This a pretty cute poem. I always love these romantic poems... a breath of fresh air sometimes, a break from all those depressing poems. What I really like about it ...

It has my username in it!!! Ahem. Anyway, this is pretty good. Some parts are a bit apathetic, and kind of confusing, but I mostly catch the drift of what ...

I like this poem. At first I was like "Who is this airhead?" lol. No offense. But as I read, I really liked it. It's pleasantly confusing--those kinds of poems ...

It's amazingly descriptive. I hope I don't sound like an idiot or a jerk by saying this, because it seems no one else thinks this, but I don't really see ...