Bittersweet

Jared! I only skimmed over the reviews briefly, so I may sound like a skipping record. Just saying. It was my sixteenth birthday, and my friend Sam had given me ...

Hey, Kylan. I know I said I'd tell you what I thought about the story later, but I figured you'd appreciate a review a bit more. Lucky you! I don't ...

Hello, Adam! :D Here with a review, quite obviously. Just... brace yourself, maybe? There was a play About the trillionth time Romeo and Juliet fell in love Okay. Love what ...

Hey Vernon! I'm here as promised! :) Here we are the 21st century, ahead and aware of it all. Machines and ideas cultivate freely. But this festering soup is decayed! ...

Hey Silent! I warn you again, this illness is doing strange things to my head. So if I say something that's like "... O_o...", forgive me. Red light is filtering ...

Hello, Catlin, m'love. This thread is unfortunately bare. But I have come, as requested! the hills will be drowning , the hills will be drowning Maybe this is just me, ...

I have returned! So let us proceed with the review. So here, Ronnie gets up: Then he slowly got up and walked over to the window. and then a paragraph ...

Hey Kylan and Conrad! I was only just going to read this (shame on me!) but your lack of reviews on this made me decide otherwise. So here I am. ...

I felt like there should be some kind of meaning, rather than "Name him Juan." I lol'd at that. I just imagined that long pause, his hand on her belly, ...

Hey, I'm Holly. You probably don't know me. xD Anyway, I saw the title of this piece of work and I was like "The Raconteurs!" I love them to pieces. ...

Gurlfrand's review makes me laugh. xD But anyway. I noticed that you posted this on Facebook so I came to review it here. The problem with this poem is that ...

Hey Catlin! Here to review, just like a promised. So let's get started! :D Her golden hair bounced I don't like that you throw out this description in the second ...

Holly has arrived, here as promised! I shan't hesitate to begin. Lucky for you, there won't be too many nitpicks because I didn't find a whole lot of things to ...

Holly has arrived with a lovely 50-pointer review on your lovely two-lined poem! I shall begin with the nitpicks. outnumber the stars Though I think this is a good comparison, ...

Hey Shoaib! I notice you are new, so welcome to YWS! There are a few things I'd like to touch on in this poem: -Capitalization -Punctuation -Rhyming scheme So let's ...