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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    Thank you so much! And I do the same thing, shortening my username when referencing myself in reviews ^_^

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    Hi Nikayla, I wanted to clear something up for you. My ending was intended to hint at the aspect of suicide, but I can see how that was misinterpreted. Thank ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: And So The Clock Ticks On

    Thank you for your review!

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Heart is in the Future

    Sorry, sorry. What I meant was that it was a great title and it completely adds to your poem. I was refuting Nikayla in saying that you relied on your ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every New Day

    I can lend you some. I've been reviewing for a while now, stocking up points ^_^

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every New Day

    It wasn't bad! I actually thought it was quite good. All I was saying was it didn't seem ... original? I mean, I totally do the same thing, writing the ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    Hi there! Thank you for your review. I'd like you to elaborate on how my poem has no flow, if that's not too much trouble. Flow is an extremely important ...

    Jan 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    Thank you so much for your kind review! I definitely like my free-verse much better than my rhymed poetry as well, but the rhyming stuff was at the beginning of ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Kayla

    Hi, sorry, I don't want to make any trouble, but the point of reviews is to help you improve your piece. If you don't agree with something, that's okay, but ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Tails Down

    I had the same thing for a really long time. All of my poems rhymed ^_^ You have a really nice piece though, I enjoyed it a lot!

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Song of the Inexcusable

    Greetings there, Remington38, I am doing well. Thank you for your kind review! People like you keep me writing! I hope you have a fabulous day and thank you for ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Song of the Inexcusable

    Thank you so much for your kind words and many thanks for your kind offer. I'll keep that in mind, sometime we'll PM! I hope you have a wonderful day ...

    Jan 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    Thank you for your comment! And yes. Trying to find the correct words has always been a struggle for me. I spend half my time composing poetry in my head, ...

    Jan 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Song of the Inexcusable

    Hey there! Thank you so much for your review. It means a lot to me to see that other people can resonate with my work. I'm going through a lot ...

    Jan 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Song of the Inexcusable

    Thank you so much. Writing has definitely always been my outlet and its positive feedback like this that keeps me going. I would apologize for your suffering, but I don't ...

    Jan 16, 2017


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