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Re: Doll: Chapter Two
Hehe. This was awesome. Seriously. There is nothing to critique you on, sadly. I wish that I could find something. I want to read more and more! So post more ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Your True Name
Finally! Some helpful critiques! Thank you so much! I'm really going to take all of this into consideration. Perra, and JFW, I really owe you guys! Thanks. Is there anyone ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 4 of Wrong or Right
Please rate this R because it has the 'f' word in it. I've been following this story and I have no critiques as of now. Next chapter I'll give a ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Bits & Pieces: Agatha
Awesomeness! (When Lilacs Were Last White) Dear Father, I pray for the stranger sitting next to me because he smells disgusting and I wish he wasn’t sitting next to me, ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Global Suicide-Chapter 1: Cause and Effect
PS: Can anyone tell me how to change the font? Don't set this in all in 'pre' font. When you posted, you must've clicked 'Pre'. Don't and the font won't ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Battle: Complete First Chapter
Oh, I'm so sorry! I totally forgot that I was supposed to do this! Sorry! Okay, I'll come back later and do this because I have to go to church. ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: The Journey chapter 1
Dude, you've been on this site long enough to know that you have to double space between paragraphs. Please! It's impossible to read without it. Please do it. I'll come ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Zekyll #1
Hey guys. There have been a lot of suggestions to change Zekyll's voice in the chapter. But that's his personality. He's a little slow at times, and is sarcastic. If ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: April is Script Frenzy Month!!
I'm speedybear! Haha. But I have no clue how to format scripts... -Jared
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: Frozen In Time
I say it looks like an egg with a little line above it... But that doesn't fit with the poem. The poem itself was good. I liked it. but I ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Maximum Ride: The Final Warning
omg!!!! The fourth one came out?? Where can I get it? -Jared
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: Pianissimo
Hey, thanks guys. If I feel like I want to, there will be another two short stories - sequels to this. The next one will most likely be called 'Mezzo ...
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Pianissimo
Thank you, you three! You've just made my day! When I get home from church today, I'll go back and edit the concerto part (make it a little longer) and ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: For You...
Yep. Please, anyone who is even remotely talented with poetry, I need help with this. I need good, constructive critism to make this the best poem I've ever wrote. -Jared
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: For You...
Hey BBB! YOu want help? I got it! I didn't really like the way you "typed" it: She... ... He... ... It sounded a little weird when I read aloud. ...
Mar 12, 2008