BigBadBear

Hey, again, thanks for reviewing my work. It has made me TONS better. Thanks for taking your time to help me! Any more comments would be appreciated! BBB

Hey thanks. I'll go back and edit this next month. But for the things that you pointed out, Kylan, I'll go and edit right now. Thanks a ton! BBB

Thanks Kim! I'll go back and edit those.

Lol...weight loss program. Funny. Anyway, I re-read it and I thought that it was much better. It made much more sense. Well, there was only one line that I have ...

Awww. That's nice. I liked it. The only thing I think you should change is that you should put a period at the end of each line, not a comma. ...

Wow..thats really good. I only found one mistake where you didn't capitalize an I, but that was all. It's really scary when people commit suicide...anyway, nice poem. It flowed very ...

Hey! I haven't read the stuff before this, but I thought it was really good. It moved at a reasonable pace, and I didn't seen any spelling or stuff. Good ...

Uh...what is this? This is just a title. Aren't you going to post the chapter, or story? BBB

Thanks so much. I am going to go and edit that right now! BBB

Hey! Like everyone else, this is really good, and mysterious. I wonder what bit him/her? I wanna read the rest! BBB

Ohh! I really liked that! That could be a really cool song! I liked it! The beginning didn't make much sense, but as the song went on, it was really ...

Thanks guys. I know that this isn't one of my best poems, but I'll try to do better next time. Thanks for leaving your comments and everything. It'll help me ...

I really liked it, because it was sad. The only thing that made it really hard to read were capitals and punctuation. Without it the poem is just like a ...

k, Thanks for all of your help. I made the corrections. I really like this poem. I don't know why...

Sorry guys. I keep forgetting to post more. I will for sure post more on Monday, because it is in my history book. (sad) Anyway, PM me constantly to remind ...