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Oops haha, typo;)

Thank you:) And i know, I try my very hardest to write longer stories but I just get so excited to get to the end haha. Would you like me ...

Thank you very much :) Ill head on over to your works and review;) Any specific piece you'd like me to read??

I aboslutely love this poem. The wording is perfect and it definitely describes how someone feels when they're raging. You're style of writing is very powerful and really delievers the ...

Thanks for you input:) This poem was supposed to be a 15-sentence portrait, because that's what my teacher called for. You suggestions will definitely be taken into concideration though:) And ...

**For anyone who doesn't know, the green awareness ribbon is for kidney diesease/failure.

Thanks for the help! I've never been good with tenses haha. I'll make sure to look into that. And I will definitely get the first chapter up as soon as ...

Thank you Nikko for the review:) I'm glad you liked it! And don't worry, there will be more dialogue in the chapter definitely. I only narrated the intro to start ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys! :D

Thanks for the review! But This isn't supposed to be a chapter or prologue or anything really. I said above that it is just supposed to be flash fiction- meaning ...

Will do Kels... Thanks, -Brie

Exactly what the person above me said....the feelings are perfect. Could relate to them a little too well. Just hopefully this isn't actually something from experience. It doesn't help... -Brie

Whoops! Sorry :/ And yeah, thanks for the review...I'll correct your name. Thanks, -Brie

I'm glad you like it. And yeah...I wrote a second part to this...but I don't think it's very well written. I give the girl "she" a name...maybe I'll add it ...

I'm glad you stopped too! And sorry for reminding you.. Thanks for the review! :) -Brie