Bhayden71297

Wow...that poem...was amazing. Beautiful. I loved it. It was deep with emotion and I couldn't help, but feel as if someone understands what I'm going through too. Whether this is ...

Can completely relate... And yeah. Though you may feel that the word "fucking" fits because really writer's block can piss you off, it doesn't. Replace it or take it out. ...

Wow! This was great. Nice job, really. Your characters do not need names. You are right about that. SOmetimes, it's not necessary. It makes the story too distant. I love ...

I, for some particular reason, am drawn to this. I really like it! It holds depth and emotion, and I understand all too well. This giant metaphor shapes the whole ...

The plot caught my eye right away. :) Very well... But what also caught my eye was the no spaces between each paragraph. That's not even very easy to read ...

This piece...was adorable. I loved it. And, as impossible as this is, it set me to tears. Something about it just touched me so deeply. It changed my whole perspective ...

First of all... WOW! Great picture I get. But... Cut down on the descriptive words. Too many adjectives....too much describing. Leave the readers some room to let their imagination figure ...

I like this a lot :) I was gonna do this contest too but I decided against it. But as it seems, you've done very well on following the rules ...

I agree with the person above. This is very intruging and then you get to the end and..splat. It just dies. Maybe if you spaced it out more? Give it ...

The first the thing that caught my eye right away...was your use of "I". I highlighted them in apurplish..that you can barely see XD Sorry... I wondered if I was ...

Someone in my family went through the same thing you did I recently found out. So sad..not even close to right. :/ Great poem, touching. Very... Sorry bout what happened ...

Wow. If this is how your feeling, then we have a lot in common. I could relate to this so well...maybe even a little too well... Great job. Dark and ...

I really like this :) Really really really like this...love it! There are a few grammatical mistakes though. And I'll be happy to point a few out for you. Her ...

Grammar is what you need to go over for this piece. And watch out with using so many adjectives. Yes I know they make the piece seem longer and more ...

I really liked this. The thing that caught me, was the ending. The last paragraph didn't relate with the past ones at all, and I'm just wondering...what was the purpose ...