BetsyJ

Hi, I read this poem because the title caught my attention. It is an attractive title. The poem is an innocent portrayal of love, or maybe the early stages of ...

Hi, This short story does present an interesting idea. You have introduced your main character, and presented their thoughts and perceptions (which is all great), but it is, however, cliched ...

Hi, First of all, I am new around here too, so I hope you have a great time reading and writing in here! :))) Coming to your narrative, it is ...

Hi, This is an exciting snippet of a story. After reading it, I felt like it was a nightmare that the main character could possibly be having with a game ...

Hi, Great job with the structure. It makes the reader really curious and want to read it right away. For me, the two most vivid images in this poem are ...

Hi, I like the structure of the poem. It keeps the reader interested and excited. I like that this poem has brevity and a twist at the end. It deals ...

Hi, here is a quick review: I noticed that nature and its vastness are a couple of overarching themes here...you have tried to describe the sky as an 'ocean', and ...

Dear manilla, Your language is admirable and very evocative. My curiosity was piqued by this piece, and I find myself wanting to know how the rest of the story goes. ...