BethsLlama

Really great poem!!!

Really great poem! The structure is really unique same with the rhythmn. No complaints! Post more poems!

Thank you so much! You have fantastic morning too :D

This is a beautiful short story. I relate to the self-doubt so much, and the anxiety felt when telling people about what you are meant to do. I almost teared ...

Thanks glad you liked it! ;)

That's good it reflects me! I'm a pretty awkward person myself :P

I did have commas, but it didn't flow as nicely to me and to some other readers. It made them pause too much. The font was automatically like that by ...

I really liked this poem! Very good work!

Thank you! I'm happy you got the message! It is one that has changed me in the most wonderful ways and motivates me to keep changing to become a better ...

Thanks! This gets my fire burning!

It makes me glad that I am helping you out!

I updated the poem! It's not as awkward now. I changed the placing of some lines too to make it flow more and make some lines stand out more.

Thanks! I was hoping to achieve unity with capitalizing, but it does make the poem seem a little awkward. I will edit it and I will upgrade the punctuation to ...

This poem is very well done. Each line had the theme present in it, as did the verses. I liked the rhythm and rhyming. I liked the freedom in the ...