Benji

That's also something I've really enjoyed : )

thank you for all the tips and pointers, i did struggle with the pacing for a lot of these, mostly because i'm writing what comes to mind in the moment, ...

you: "then beg"

you know us, totally not hiding a third story arc where we realize running away maybe not be the smartest choice, deep down in there somewhere

love this chapter and this series and also editing my double posted comment so i gotta take this time to right my wrongs!!!

it's treason, then.

no problem!!

we live in a young writer's society :xd:

oh gosh why did it post three times...

This was an enjoyable short poem, I love the choice of words and how you space out each section with enough substance and thought of their own to portray how ...

This was an enjoyable short poem, I love the choice of words and how you space out each section with enough substance and thought of their own to portray how ...

This was an enjoyable short poem, I love the choice of words and how you space out each section with enough substance and thought of their own to portray how ...

whoops, sorry about the double post!