BenFranks

Hey there. I'll just address your footnotes to begin with: (And please do not post about lack of puncuation. Feelings and thoughts cannot always be confined by periods or other ...

Hi there, This was an interesting short piece - although the idea itself didn't particularly grab me as original; the term 'rebel' too is a cliche image. The perspective and ...

Hi there, I can't say I liked this poem very much - but I do really like the idea of it. Saying that, your last stanza is superb, it stands ...

Afternoon, I do like this. I like it because it's simple. Your first two stanzas are what I'd call 'impersonal', bar the first two lines. I admire how this switches ...

Sensitive issues need more time and nurture to form into great poetry, what you have here is the frameworks of an idea. If you want to be subversive to social ...

Good evening, Your main struggle here is the failure to adopt a consistent style. Your formality is a little bewildered, you drift between coloquial-chatting, like the reviewer above me mentioned, ...

Good Morning, here's my thoughts. God, No! Signs You May Already Be an Atheist and Other Magical Tales by Penn Jillette Published by Simon & Schuster Kindle version: $11.99 USD ...

Every human needs to vent their anger, speak out and release some kind of pain on somebody . Whether you believe he is sick due to your doings or mere ...

Evening. Self Esteem. Soooo high school isn't working out for you? SAME! This is a list I am conjured up. Do you mean, I have conjured up ? Also, there ...

Hello Lexie I've come out of my YWS-Leave to review your piece as requested. My suggestions/comments are in blue . I hope this helps. The Influences of Harry Potter James ...

Ian McEwan's "Enduring Love". Booker Prized author and extremely well written novel, but the movie starring Daniel Craig fell flat and changed the ending. Mind you, it was kind of ...

Afternoon, On with the review: You have some good ideas here and the poetry is comforting to read. The only problem I think this poetry has is a bit of ...

Evenin'. This reads like a broken song with its lyrical and rhythmic features and there's little to spur any grasps of attention. You've called it a rant but it only ...

Hey there, First point I'd recommend to you before I start the review is that you remove the poll straight away. People have the option to click "Like" if they ...

The worst possible thing you could do is criticise love poetry with the labelling of the word "cliche". So much poetry has been written about this emotion that it could ...