BenFranks

Hey there! Here's a couple of points about the English Literature exam, especially concerning Of Mice & Men. - Firstly, you spend too much time on Social Historical Context explaining ...

Okay. I think when you write an opinionated article such as this, especially when it attacks such a broad form of writing and world service, you need to make sure ...

Hey there Light Devil! I thought this was very good and I love the mystery the voice is given because it's original and quite poetic, which I have to say ...

What I love about this piece is the style. It's engaging to the reader of how you've bullet pointed your rants in the alphabetical pre-bracket layout thing. It was amusing ...

Do you mean that I should post each chapter as a separate segment? I thought about doing that, but I think it would be too confusing for people to have ...

Just a few suggestions, I'll give feedback later :) a) You're more likely to get reviews if you remove the poll, people will comment on style and writing as part ...

Hello Isha, To be brutally honest with you, I found the starting paragraph extremely informal. Such as the dual use of "and" in your opening line and the "what not" ...

THis is pretty stunning, I wouldn't have come up with something quite this good after a million efforts. :) I'm jealous of your excellence :) *Likes*

Hey there Shubhi! I'm sorry if this is short, but I'll give you my feedback anyway. I thought this was good, mostly because we're constantly being placed in the character's ...

I think the only thing that I can really suggest on top of the other reviewer's comments is that you need to spend more time on each point so the ...

Hey there. I thought that you have structured this writing well to make it thought provoking and you've written the subject quite well indeed. What I do think for improvements ...

Hey there! I have to admit that I did enjoy the imagery and some of the questions that were asked here and the poem kind of became a very artistic ...

'Ullo co-Bond lover! :) Here as you asked! My thoughts and suggestions, like usual, are in a lovely colour for you and in amongst the quote below! Hope this helps! ...

Hey there iceberg! If I'm honest, I was a little confused by this post, trying to establish if it even was a work, but in a sense I can kind ...

Hey there! I must say I found the repetition in this quite cheery and it was one of those poems that even though the line length varied oddly, it was ...