BellaRoma

Thanks for the reviews! See you next chapter

You might not... No spoilers!

Again, "stole" was the word I wanted. It's kind of a slow, sneaky movement. I think you'll be interested to see Sara's role next chapter(s)

Thanks for the review! We are going to keep coming back to the crime... It is kinda important. See you next chapter!

But Dye talks in double quotation marks, doesn't she? I know about trouble with speech marks... Layla and Mercy in my story use singles when they communicate telepathically or whatever ...

No worries! :)

She's not the villain really. Kind of an anti-heroine...

Nope. No one but Layla knows. She just took over then... They are very separate, but in the same body the whole time.

Nope, I meant "ever" XD He'd never see me cry would be a separate sentence. Thanks for the reviews! Meet my villain, Dr Aiden btw...

Thank you for the review... There's more coming. Aiden's motives will be explained - I'm coming round to them! Patience...

"Startling", as in shocking or peculiar in some way.

Hi, guys! What a busy bee I've been :) So, this is the start of the future chapter rework. Not a lot has changed on this one. Can you please ...

PS. She played the guitar in the future chapters, so that technically hasn't happened yet (and it won't now I've included it here). :p PPS. I decided on the "where ...

I'm sorry about the plot holes... Thanks for reviewing so quickly!

Hey guys! So, 15 chapters in.... We're about halfway there! Thanks to everyone who has stuck with me thus far. I think the animal metaphors work for Layla, in a ...