BellaRoma

Sorry, I had very little time then. I'm glad you reviewed again, thanks! Nitpicks taken. Double post again! The nightmare is what Layla thought up; she fears this may have ...

Next chapter is Mercy again.

Next chapter is Mercy again.

Okay. So much school, not enough writing time. Ch 12 soon ish. I'm glad you are caught up!!

No worries. Thank you very much. PS. Dr Aiden is meant to be the crazy one. Layla is undecided.

Aww, yes it was. Nitpicks taken. The doctor is meant to be creepy/evil [strikethrough] lay off Mercy [/strikethrough]. Part 4 is showing Dr Aiden being even more evil. There aren't ...

Anyone could've done it. There are a lot of chapters there.

Trying to share with Mercy. I have had so many comments on the commas. It works both ways and I learnt it that way. Thanks for your awesome review. PS. ...

Mercy's reaction is next chapter. It's her POV again. I have to admit, Layla is the selfless one. Thanks for reviewing. The notification didn't come through.

Mercy's reaction is next chapter. It's her POV again. I have to admit, Layla is the selfless one. Thanks for reviewing. The notification didn't come through.

Hi all. I'm excited that I finally deemed this complete. :-D So, not a lot happens. I was focusing on Layla and her... emotional situation. Something had to click, I ...

I will at some point, don't worry

I just reread this. God, I was really out to make people hate Dr Aiden. XD "Oh poppet..." did it for me. I totally agree with your quote choice too.

Aww, thank you :$ I've attempted bits and pieces, but I have never stuck to an idea before. Like I said to a lot of people, this is incredibly unrefined, ...

What would you say if I told you that this is my first novel? Thanks for the review btw.