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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Alice's Adventures in Zombieland

    I think this is very well written. You have a great writing style :) Just write more, I'm interested to read more.

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Final Goodbye

    Thank you for the pointers :) I was in a weird place when I wrote this, in my defence. My mind was all over the place.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Chasing nightmares

    This is brilliant :) Reminds me of my time at school.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I love this poem :) It's so whimsical and humorous.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sorry

    I like it :) There's real emotion here.

    Sep 5, 2011


When you cut pieces out of the truth to avoid looking like a fool, you end up looking like a moron instead.
— Robin Hobb