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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Flower

    Wow! I absolutely love the emotion conveyed in this poem. It portrays a life experience many of us go through. I especially love the lines, No, the beauty will always ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Quiet Path

    First off, I like it! It overall flowed nicely and it displays a clear mental image. While it is a bit confusing, I think one of the main points of ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wouldn't Mind, Being Blind

    Maybe I've misread the notion, but I can kind of relate to the feelings conveyed in this poem. In a way. I suppose if we were blind, we wouldn't have ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: 3 Poems on Childhood

    Wow! These are very expressive and emotional. I can really relate to these especially because I'll be starting High School next year, and i'm really afraid to leave my childhood ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forget

    This speaks the truth. You spoke natural truths of humanity that are the same for everyone yet nobody likes to admit to. And you did this while maintaining rhythm and ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Unreal Letters

    At first, I'll admit, I was a bit confused by this poem. But then I read it again, and it made so much more sense. I enjoyed this poem. it ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Patriot

    I liked this poem :) I think it has a good meaning and message, and it makes me proud to be an American. We have a lot to be thankful ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Slips of the Pen

    I typically don't like poems of this style, but I actually enjoyed this one. Nice imagery, you really captured the moment in the bar. I can't really make a suggestion ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Warmth-Seeker

    Usually I'm not one for sad endings. But I can't see this story any other way. It was flawlessly and beautifully executed, and the story is enticing and gripping. I ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: This Valentine

    Wow! I really liked this. It's really expressive, and I can relate to your feelings. On Valentine's Day, many of us were feeling that way, and I'm happy you put ...

    Feb 16, 2011


One is not born, but rather becomes a woman.
— Simone de Beauvoir, The Second Sex